One blog that i thought was really exemplary was Sarah's blog. In her posts, she managed to show a lot of emotion while also making both her poems and her responses very factual, strong and clever. That perfect mix of emotions and facts is something not a lot of people can come across.
Her sonnet was quite impressive, and it seems like she actually took time and effort to write it-With the perfect iambic pentameter and perfect sonnet form, and it actually developed well and beautifully as a poem! It's written beautifully!
Great Job Sarah!
Another blog I really admired was Julia's blog. Everything she writes flows out with precision, making sense and sounding beautiful. It's not choppy at all. (A big problem everybody always complains about in my pieces is the choppiness.)
Her sonnet is also beautiful. It leaves room for the mind to wander, and out your own interpretation, while also stating some things very clearly. And the things she states are very connectible, without sounding cliche. The next entry down, her poetry forward, is also above standards. It sounds beautiful, and is just so TRUE and cool.
Great job, Julia!
The last blog I'm writing about that really impressed me was Tomin's. (No surprise there.)
Every time I read any of Tomin's posts I'm blown away. Also, I'm blown away by realizing that some guys actually CAN write. It just seems sometimes that boys are not capable of expressing emotions or writing anything meaningful. I know that's really sexist of me, and looking at Tomin's blog reminds me that I'm totally wrong. He is not only capable of expressing things and writing with emotions, he does both things amazingly! Tomin has a voice in his writing that i wish i had in my speaking. It's really gorgeous, and never bores me.
Bravo, Tomin!
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